Thread:King Nasara/@comment-2106279-20190209045556/@comment-2106279-20190211205108

"While Pilgrim was listening, Bendix said Konchevsky that she hid in Michigan"

"When Bendix hung up, Pilgrim asked Konchevsky does he believe in, only to Konchevsky replying that he did not even know what is it."

^ those two sentences, for example, are grammatically incorrect.

It should be "While Pilgrim was listening, Bendix told Konchevsky that she was hiding in Michigan" "Bendix said Konchevsky" doesn't make sense.

For the second one, it would be: "When Bendix hung up, Pilgrim asked Konchevsky if he believed in divine providence, only for Konchevsky to reply that he was unaware what providence meant."