Thread:Shabook/@comment-2215298-20160329150651

Hi Shabook, I assumed the edits to the Kingpin page were by another editor.

Here is the message I sent him regarding my edition:

Hey Charlie,

I understand if my revisions to the Kingpin page were overly lengthy. However, I feel that many of my revisions were necessary. Considering the injuries on Marlene's arms, it is clear Bill has historically abused her, rather than solely in this episode; it is implied that Wilson had to stare at the wall many times. It's also important to note the fact that the Fisks were not well-off as it is the motivation behind Bill's campaign. Furthermore, I think we need more detail about beating the neighbor and killing Bill.

Clearly you  are the more experienced editor, so I'll leave it to you, but those are just my thoughts.



Thanks,

Meme99  