Thread:Nerdtastic1221/@comment-3005213-20170321232719/@comment-25999669-20170322134728

Yes you are... If you're writing about a scene where only one Meachum is being featured though, then the first mention of the name would be Joy Meachum and from then on it can be just Meachum... But yes, if there are more than one Meachum in the scene, then you should be using their first names to save confusion.

The way I write biographies (and I'm very OCD about this), is I work around images. To use John Garrett's biography as an example as I wrote a lot of it's content, I think about the scene and key images from it, then I write the paragraphs to fit with the images. Where I personally am very OCD about it is that I write the paragraphs to just the right length that the words fit perfectly around the image as you'll see in the Garrett biography.

I'm currently rewriting a lot of Thor's biography to do this as well, I just haven't added all the images to it yet so that might give you a good idea of what I mean.

When Iron Fist fights the assassins in the hallway during episode 4, you've writing that fight as one section... Personally I would do three, I would have an image of him striking a pose as the fight begins, one during the fight which would likely be him dodging the axe that's thrown, and one at the end of the fight when he and Joy are in the lift. Nothing wrong with how you've done it, but that's my mind set going into writing biographies.

I hope I've made sense and feel free to ask me any questions.