Thread:Geordiegaviino/@comment-24675861-20150310194624

Thank you for help on the Ravagers article.

You wanted suggestions on how to do it better?

1. NO first names: Last Names sound more professional.

2. Try to be as factual as possible from an in-universe perspective: YOU might not know the reason, but I'm sure THEY do. (Try not to say "For unknown reasons".)

Hope that helps... 