Thread:Shabook/@comment-3164086-20141217065819/@comment-3164086-20141230000310

In addition, you suggest that I edit section by section. Okay, fine, but seeing as to how this is literally EXACTLY what I did in the first place to the article, an action which only earned me an immediate reversion from you. This being despite the fact that my edit, in my opinion, improved the section noticeably for the English language, aside from the several errors which I will now admit I did make. Both of these factors lead me to believe that the best option is simply to ask you about each edit first, for the security of my editing skills now and in the future.

- Master Tej -