Thread:Shabook/@comment-25940973-20150709111642/@comment-112155-20150709183547

Well, first off, the first paragraphs need a rewrite, as I stated before. Paragraphs, and especially articles must never begin with "After this happened..."

Second, the info that needs to be expanded, as it is explained inside the tag, is the role of the soldiers during the Battle of the Norco, focusing on what they actually did: Some of them ambushed Stark and Rhodes, some were killed in the explosions, some of them managed to destroy a few armors...