Thread:Shabook/@comment-13471981-20150208152002/@comment-13471981-20150212081601

Me again :)

I don't see why you saw the need to undo my edit? I provided my reasoning, it would've been courteous of you to do so as well. I undid Bratpack's addition because his phrasing made it sound like Dottie placed the piece of metal in the lock, which isn't true. She merely put back the piece of metal that had been put there by Peggy, and that idea is already expressed through "placing everything exactly as it originally was". To repeat that would be redundant.

Secondly, I don't see it necessary to note that Dottie handcuffed herself to the bed as she went to sleep that night as it's pretty clearly implied she does it every night. This makes that particular piece of information not relevant (which also has been noted in the "Early Life" section as well).

Your thoughts?