Thread:Nerdtastic1221/@comment-5368694-20190726083343

I concede to my stubbornness in edit warring, but I am baffled at your reasoning for reverting the Spider-Man edits. You say that taking out massive chunks of the biography section is unnecessary -- but do consider that these chunks contained multiple violations of the Manual of Style.

So let me ask you: do you believe that this makes sense in the MCU Wiki? You can find this paragraph at the end of this section.

"As he charged into battle with the rest of his team, Spider-Man briefly fought with Scarlet Witch as he fired his Web-Shooters at her while dodging the cars she threw back in return and evading Hawkeye's various trick arrows before Hawkeye had then ignored Spider-Man in order to fight against the Black Widow. Spider-Man then just swung across the airport dodging whatever Scarlet Witch threw at him in an attempt to assist Iron Man's fight against the opposing team."

This is the kind of language that I have been trying to replace with concise language as per the MoS, section by section.

There are serious grammatical errors that I have been trying to eliminate, an example of which you can find in |this section:

"As a result, Giant-Man fell over, hitting the now overly excited Spider-Man on the way down, making him fly into a pile of wooden boxes; knocking him unconscious for a short while on the battlefield as the fight continued elsewhere."

Clauses separated by semi-colons must be independent clauses, and "knocking him unconscious for a short while on the battlefield as the fight continued elsewhere" is not one of these.

There are far more violations of the Manual of Style in the Spider-Man article that I could list here, but these are the two that I found the most disturbing. 