Thread:Bratpack/@comment-24239527-20150302182830/@comment-24675861-20150302192652

No problem if it is shorter.

Try your best to write from Thomas Ward's POV. Grant said that he has two brothers and a sister; thus, Thomas has two brothers and a sister. Christian said that Mom loved Thomas more. Thomas Ward received more attention than his siblings from his mother; it made Christian feel neglected. See how I'm rewriting what happened as if Thomas said it.

Sometimes it's difficult. Shabook comes along and corrects my work. That is why I love this wiki. A person whose first language is Not English corrects MY grammar...