Thread:~Silverstream/@comment-24675861-20150116223535/@comment-24239527-20150119054101

While we're on the subject of quotes, I have a question. When action is taking place during the dialogue, is it ok to list in parenthesis as it is here:

"Here's the new Night-Night pistol." (Ward tries it out) "Sorry, Fitz. It's close, but it's just not right."

Or should actions be ignored? I personally think they should be ignored for consistency's sake...