Thread:Rodangizzardcrusher3/@comment-26687285-20170129195833/@comment-25692211-20170129203233

Marvelfan94 wrote: This is a little something I've prepared for you to help you with your writing style, JP. I've compiled a list of all of the phrases and expressions that I would suggest you avoid relying on in your stories. This way you can look for new and more sophisticated ways of getting these scenarios/ideas across to the audience. Hope it's worth your time.

P.S. I'll probably be adding a few as time goes by, so keep an eye out.

1: I’m coming with you–No you’re not.

2: You couldn’t possibly know what I’m going through.

3: [As a response] Says who?.

4: Is that that all you’ve got/the best you can do?.

5: I could tell you…but then I’d have to kill you.

6: We’re not so different, you and I.

7: We’ve got company.

8: I was born ready.

9: Don’t you on die me!.

10: Try me.

11: This is your destiny.

12: Donde esta [insert English word] por favor?.

13: I’m just getting started.

14: Cover me!/ I’m going in!.

15: No. Come in. ____ was just leaving.

16: We’ve got to stop meeting like this.

17: Well, if it isn’t ____.

18: I’m just doing my job.

19: You’ll never get away with this! – Watch me/I already have.

20: Now...where were we?.

21: How hard can it be?.

22: What part of _____ don’t you understand?.

23: Is this some kind of joke?.

24: [Sarcastically] Oh ha-ha, very funny.

25: You ain’t seen nothin’ yet.

26: It’s just a scratch.

27: This just gets better and better.

28: Shut up and kiss me.

29: Not on my watch!.

30: You just don’t get it, do you?.

31: [Punch] That’s for_____!.

32: Yeah, you better run.

33: Get outta there!.

34: _____called. They want their_____back.

35: A storm is coming.

36: In English please!.

37: I’ve gotta get me one of those/these.

38: NO!.

39: There are only two kinds of people in the world.

40: It’s Showtime!.

41: What just happened?.

42: Try to get some sleep.

43: What are you doing here?–I was about to ask you the same thing.

44: You’ll have to kill me–Oh, I will…

45: Note to self...

46: When a mommy and a daddy love each other very much...

47: You again!?.

48: Okay, here’s what we’re gonna do...[cut to a different scene]

49: Try to get some sleep.

50: We’ll never make it in time!.

51: Whatever you do, don’t look down.

52: What’s the worst that could happen?/What have we got to lose?.

53: It’s been a long time.

54: Don’t make me do this.

55: That’s it!. You’re off the case!.

56: Wait! I can explain! This isn’t what it looks like.

57: Don’t even think about it.

58: I wouldn’t do that if I were you.

59: Tell _____ I love her/him/them very much.

60: Don’t do anything stupid.

61: _____is my middle name.

62: Look what the cat dragged in.

63: You look like shit.

64: We can do this the easy way, or the hard way.

65: I have a bad feeling about this.

66: I’m getting too old for this (shit).

67: Time’s up.

68: It’s quiet. Too quiet.

69: That’s what I’m talking about.

70: It's not the number of breaths we take, but the number of moments that take our breath away.

71: Every day is a gift, that’s why we call it the present.

72: You have to kiss a lot of frogs before you find your prince.

73: Everything happens for a reason.

74: If life gives you lemons, make lemonade.

75: Live every day like it's your last.

76: You miss 100% of the shots you don't take.

77: If I’m not back in __ minutes…

78: Love means never having to say you’re sorry.

79: Dance like no one’s watching.

80: Bombs away!.

81: Saddle up.

82: Lock and load!.

83: I eat ____ like you for breakfast.

84: Oh now you’re really starting to piss me off!.

85: If we make it out of this alive…/In case we die…

86: You’re either very brave…or very stupid.

87: Listen to me, and listen good, ’cause I’m only gonna say it once.

88: It’s called ____, you should try it sometime.

89: I’ll be (right) back.

90: No signal.

91: Let’s get (the hell) out of here!.

92: I’ll never let you go.

93: You’re gonna get us both/all killed.

94: I will never forgive you for this.

95: Don’t ever speak to me____ again.

96: I’m sorry to tell you this, but…

97: Shall we get started/begin?.

98: You’re insane–am I?.

99: Can’t you see ____?–No.

100: [Response] Don’t ask.

101: Don’t ask, don’t tell.

102: Bag em’ and tag em’.

103: You know where to find me.

104: [Something another character said] this! [Gunshot].

105: Hand over the ____, and no one gets hurt.

106: [Dramatic] Why?.

107: Don’t make me ask you again.

108: You want me?, I’m right here.

109: That’s impossible/How is this possible?.

110: This is bigger than you/me.

111: Let’s face it..

112: Listen ____. I don’t know who you are or what you want, but...

113: I’ll make you/them pay for what you/they did.

114: [About a large vehicle or weapon] I have a permit/license for that.

115: [After breaking something expensive] I promise I’m going to pay for that.

116: Don’t bullshit me!.

117: Forget everything you think you know.

118: You’re coming with me.

119: You’re going down/I’m taking you down.

120: I’ll give you/do anything you want.

121: I can’t do it-Yes you can.

122: It’s complicated/It’s a long story.

123: That doesn’t look/sound good.

124: [As an instruction] You know what to do.

125: If we die____ I’m gonna kill you.

126: [As a response] I/We never left.

127: [As a response] You’ll see soon enough.

128: Pick on someone your own size!.

129: Honey! I’m home!.

130: Nothing can/could’ve prepare(d) you/me/us for____.

131: If you live like you’re dying you’re already dead.

132: You should’ve quit while you were ahead. I can't tell what I'm more surprised by. The fact that you listed all these things or that I've somehow never used any of them, as far as I know, at least.