Thread:Shabook/@comment-26273890-20150810102557/@comment-112155-20150810103501

For the Academy, minor gramar issues: The second paragraph was too long, words were repeated (Weaver revealed..., revealing that...), a few contractions...

Not a major issue, I fixed it myself.

As for the Inhumans, besides the citation, it needs to add how a Little reference to how Afterlife was created, and how the Inhumans also breed with normal humans, resulting in what Jiaying called the descendants.