Thread:Shabook/@comment-3164086-20141231191555/@comment-112155-20141231192343

I asked fellow administrator Bratpack, expert in English Grammar and Spelling, to check and fix the article, and he would have it done in no time.

As you were once told in another wiki: "Rather than work back through what you wrote, however, I found it easier to revert it to make the required changes."

Therefore, it is easier to fix "all" the gramatical mistakes from the current version than to try rewrite, for the third time, the rewordings you want to apply to the article.

Therefore, the protection will stay until Bratpack finishes his edits, as this is one of the examples specified in our Protection Policy.