Thread:Mister Explicit/@comment-112155-20150905114834/@comment-24669364-20150905124644

Shabook wrote: I could understant that you made an edit, then realized you forgot something, and then adding it in one or two edits. But eight edits within minutes...

Also, the Rewrite tag asked for a Full rewrite, especially the sections beginning with "After...", in-universe wiki style, some gramar issues, and the appropriate verb tense. None of these mistakes had been fixed. As I said, I'll try my very best to improve. I'm glad you gave me a specific list of what to correct. Verb tense, full rewrite, grammar issues, change sections with "After". Got it.