Thread:~Silverstream/@comment-24442508-20140809184000/@comment-24442508-20140811175059

Sorry it took me so long to get back to this, had some unexpected interruptions this morning...

The plot synopsis for Season 1 needs images, and isn't all in past tense it is sloppily written.

Character Pages:

Melinda May's page omits the events of episodes 9-15.

The True colors section on Ward is sloppy and very short, the title is inaccurate

Coulson's page starting at the return is out of under and while in some places this helped understanding (like Skye's mystery) it also led to the omission of episodes 6, 8, and 9.

Skyes page omits episode 2, 6-10, but is otherwise pretty good.

Fitz's page is missing episode 3,4, and 5. The section on the Hub is not in past tense, the Secrets section is unclear and the page lacks images.

Simmons' page is missing 3, 4, and 5. Same problems as Coulson's page with out of order problems.

Also a lot of the supporting characters have similar problems.

Character NOTES: Some ideas on how I think this could be improved: the articles shouldn't cover every action of the character, just general information on episodes where the character was a background character,(as not the Simmons of episode 6), which is generally whats missing. But when important character stuff is left out (like May's coversations with Coulson in episode 12). Go through these with a fine tooth comb and make sure everythins is readable and clear and is properly linked.

General Notes, go through the expansion section and the stub section and see what you can add. If you have other problems that you think should be fixed tell me and I'll add them to the list. We have time between now and 9/23 so we can be picky!

Coluanprime (talk) 17:51, August 11, 2014 (UTC)