Thread:Bennyhef234/@comment-25999669-20190315230913/@comment-32551792-20190315232017

No matter how careful you do something, you are, along with everyone single person ever, bound to make some errors. Fortunately, yours are only small ones. So, when I change how you worded something to sound better

(example: Hawkeye eventually made his way to the middle of Novi Grad, where he reunited with Black Widow who had managed to escape from her imprisonment, as Hawkeye took off his jacket and gave Black Widow her weapons to fight.)

That's just too long of a sentence, as well as the necessary commas causing it to not make sense. "So as BW escaped from imprisonment, Hawkeye was taking off his jacket?" So you are not immune to to mistakes, so accept when someone will fix some for you. Your edits aren't perfect, don't be mistaken.

Now, with the quote. This whole belief that the focus character has to be the first one to speak is ridiculous. That's not how it works for the most part, as you mentioned. So, when you have the quote starting with "Hey, man.", you might as well put the initiating line to complete the quote (every other line is included).

In short, I think you should not get too caught up in all this, you've done a lot of good for the page, so don't obsess and be stubborn when someone also tries to help.