Thread:Phineas Flash/@comment-25692211-20151206005139/@comment-27197055-20151224201836

Okay, so I finished reading the Quick-Cut, and it's good, but I have some concerns. first of all, the dialogue needs work. Wanda calling Pietro "brother" sounds a bit too fancy. plus there seems to be a bit TOO MUCH talking. That's one of the main reasons i dislike the Flash show on CW. They just talk about their feelings and analyze their situation way too much, like when Pietro is talking to Wanda before they suit up. Was that conversation really nessessary? They had a long conversation about what Pietro was thinking about on the boat to Korea, even though you already visibly SHOWED what he was thinking. (Comparing two pictures.) you could've skipped the arguement and just had Ultron tell Wanda to keep an eye on him. So here's my advice: show don't tell. It's a movie, so you can SHOW QS' change. If you have too many scenes where the characters talk, and analyze their own situation, it gets boring and mushy. And than QS and Hawkeye had a long conversation about Hawkeye's family, even though we've already seen that too, when the Avengers went to the safehouse. You see what I'm talking about? If you've already shown it, don't make a long conversation explaining what we've already seen clearly. I wanted more Quicksilver ACTION. Transision and character development is important, but the conversations seem unnessesary, boring, and kinda awkward.

Lastly, calling QS a "Quick Little Bastard" over and over again is kinda annoying, especially since we want to hear him be called Quicksilver. How about you make Hawkeye coin his codename at some point, and than it sticks.