Thread:Shabook/@comment-3164086-20150107184150/@comment-112155-20150107185709

I knew you would not accept the rewrites, but you should check our Manual of Style. Every paragraph beginning with "During this", "After this", "While this", is greatly discouraged.

Besides, every article has to keep consistency, consistency within itself, and consistency with other similar articles.

And once again, changing the actual words taken from the scripts, or the things seen on-screen to match your point of view is not allowed, that is why there is a policy about Neutral Point of View.

For example, given that Coulson was shown alone in the Sandbox, you adding that he went there with his team is YOUR speculation, they could have stayed with Simmons in an hospital in Morocco to check side effects, for example.

Another example, Blake did not order Coulson to throw Simmons, and there is no way to confirm that he knew she was infected. Blake simply informed Coulson of an order to remove all infected cargo, and if Coulson had fulfilled that order, it would have included Simmons, no more, no less.

I did not undo your edits, but I had to fix thing to match the actual events seen on-screen, not your own interpretation of them.

So, the reviewed versión is gonna stay. If you don't accept it, another admin would check it to have a second opinion.

But honestly, I hope not having to witness another attempt to impose your edits again...